The scripts final draft

Issy changed the script in response to some of the feedback that we received on our first draft; the first thing that Issy did was shorten the script as it was too long, also we made sure that Soraya said the script slowly and full of emotion in her voice so that the audience could recognise the pain and feelings of this character. The feedback showed that people wanted the voiceover to start later in the opening sequence rather than straight away from the start.